Lost City of Atlantis Speech

Hi welcome back to my blog. I am here today to show you my speech about the Lost City of Atlantis. For writing we had to do a speech about what group we are in for a mysteries.  I worked so hard to do this. I hope you like my speech slide. 

My Twin Friend

In the past weeks our class (Ako Ngatahi) were writing a short story about a video titled “The Present”. It was a story about a boy who got a present and it was a puppy. After he discovered that the puppy only had three legs.

Here is the video, I think that you might enjoy the video and maybe my writing.

“The Present”

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

 

MY TWIN FRIEND

I was playing minecraft on my xbox one. Then my mum came in and put down a box in front of me on the table. I was thinking it could be a new video game that I could play on my xbox one. Then my mum open the blinds and my eyes hurt so badly because the sun was too bright. I said “ Mum shut the blinds please” Then the phone rang. Then my mum pickup the phone and answer it. My mum went upstairs to talk.

Then I opened the box and there was a puppy that barked at me. He was cute. But I saw the puppy Had half a leg. I said “uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu” so I drop the puppy and kick it away. I said to myself He cute  no remember He cute no remember. The puppy saw a red ball and he grap it. Then the puppy put down the red ball near my feet I pick it up and throw it away. The ball land in the box. The puppy ran a grab the ball but he got stuck in the box. He tried to get out of the box. He got out of   the box and he grab the ball. He put the ball by my feet again.Then I pick up the ball and my crutches. I like my puppy because it look like my twin brother. Because I had a half a leg that why he look like my twin brother.

I said “mum we going outside” So we played outside with the ball  

  THE END  

My Cartoon

Last week we did a cartoon. We had to make a story with some photo's. We added speech bubbles and wrote down words in the speech bubbles. We made squares then we had think how many squares that we needed in our cartoon. It was so much fun to make a cartoon.We made the cartoon's on google drawing. We to think want background we need. I used yellow for my background because it would be better on my cartoon. It is a good color to used. I got 9 photo's in my cartoon. I hope you like my cartoon.

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My letter

This week we have being doing letters when we will be 25. When we be older we want be something when we grow up so I hope you like my letter the I write.  

Dear Future Me,

By the time you read this many years will have passed.  In fact you will be turning 25 years old.  This is a little reminder of what your goals, dreams and aspirations were as an 11 year old.

I hope that you kept working hard and being friendly to everyone so that you could get a job serving people in a flash restaurant. I hope that you have a stylish uniform and meet heaps of famous people at your restaurant.

The sport that I did right now was basketball and hockey. I did those because I like to do sport. When I did basketball I got fitter.

After high school did I still talk to friends that were at primary school?

I visited Brisbane to explore. I looked everywhere. I stayed at my uncle's house in Brisbane. I went Next year for a holiday. I left Brisbane on the 17 of March.

Yours Sincerely

9 year old Me

My poem

This week we have being doing a poem in writing and we being doing the lie and the truth so here is mine poem that I wrote in writing.

Space chimp sent to space

W.A.L.T: To write a narrative

This week we done your space chimp and we had to fix up the mistakes then we had to put it on a slide. Here is my one that is on slides. Hope enjoy my story and please drop a comment.
 
I am proud that I got this finished before lunch. Next time I will add more detail. I found it helpful getting teachers to check my drafts.

The worst day ever

Battle at Kruger Sequence

                              W.A.L.T: Recall Events in order

	The herd of buffalo are walking along in the the river.
	A pride of lions are lying in the bright yellow sun.
	The pride of lions they are getting ready to pounce the buffalo.
	The lion is chasing the baby buffalo.
	The lion got the baby buffalo and the little baby fall in the water.
	The crocodile and the lions are fighting over the baby buffalo.
	The buffalo around the pride of lions.
	The gagging is kicking the lion.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.