Space chimp sent to space

W.A.L.T: To write a narrative

This week we done your space chimp and we had to fix up the mistakes then we had to put it on a slide. Here is my one that is on slides. Hope enjoy my story and please drop a comment.
 
I am proud that I got this finished before lunch. Next time I will add more detail. I found it helpful getting teachers to check my drafts.