W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Fun at Spencer Park
On Friday the 10th of March Ako Ngatahi, Ruma Toru and Wahi Ako left school on blue buses to go to Spencer Park. we talk about what are we going to do on the weekend on the bus. When we got to the park then we had to sort out the the groups. Then group one went to the Lagoon Walk when we got there I saw birds. I heard the birds sing in the tree. I could smell the fresh air and I saw horses walking past me. I we had a snack while we wait until we can go up to the hurt to see better to look. Then we went back to the park so we can have some morning tea we eat our lunch at a picnic table. Then we had some time to play on the playground. Once the time was up we had to get our bags and line up. Then we walk to the beach to find beach stuff. When I got to the beach the smell change it smell like sea salt. When I put my feet in the water I could see my feet because in sea is clear crystal. The sky was bright blue and the sun was hot like a spa. When we got beach stuff we went and put them in our bags. I did not get any beach stuff because I didn’t want any. Then we had a sand castle competition. We can work with two people or by yourself. I work with two people because it will be easy . Then we put our shoes on and we start going back to the park. Then we went and sit down on the grass to listen what are we doing next. We had a lot of time to play on the playground.Then we got called back to get our bags and sit on the grass and listen. Then we grab a fruit and eat it. When we are done our fruit we hop on the bus and go back to school to home.
